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Naruto Fanfiction- Irony In Imperfection (KisameItachi)
Bill Nails

Title: Irony In Imperfection

Pairings: Kisame/Itachi

Rating: M (contains sexual scenes- come on, it's me, you should have expected it! ^^)

Summary: For Kisame, Itachi's imperfections only make him more alluring. Oneshot drabble. Lemon.

Disclaimer: *sob* Not mine... *sob*

A random drabble-type thing that came to me one day. It only took a couple of days to write, in comparison to the usual few months it take me to think of something, write it at a pace of about a sentence a week and then leave it in a drawer for a month as I can't be bothered to type it up. Maybe in the future I'll be able to post fics every couple of weeks! Or maybe this was a fluke and you're going to have to wait at least a year before you get any more smut from me. Anyway, read, and hopefully enjoy. I think I was trying to sound intelligent when I wrote this, and I quite like how it's come out- that probably means everyone else will find it a big load of fail. I hope not.  =D


Irony In Imperfection

Itachi's legs, lean and smooth, brush rhythmically against Kisame's hips, skimming tantalisingly over hypersensitive skin as he rides his lover slowly; he moves with a fluid elegance and grace that seems inherent in everything he does. He's so tiny, Kisame thinks, his strong fingers tightening their grip on the narrow waist, resting his thumbs on the soft skin above the jut of Itachi's hipbones.

With his hair falling across his face and shoulders like dark silk over porcelain, he looks utterly, utterly beautiful, and it is then that Kisame realises that Itachi must be as close to perfection as anyone has ever been. This precious little thing, this beautiful creature straddling his waist, holds such immense power within him that he seems almost infallible, a higher being who cannot be defeated by mere mortals.

That is not to say, of course, that he is completely without fault or flaw; it is these little things, though, that make Itachi human; real and tangible and not an untouchable, unreachable god.

Ironic, Kisame thinks. Itachi's imperfections serve only to make him even more perfect.

He is dragged from his thoughts as Itachi shudders and gasps; hit the spot, Kisame thinks. With a smirk, he uses one leg and a jerk of his hips to nudge Itachi forward, off of his cock and flat against his body, before flipping them over and looking down at the Uchiha, who is flushed and gorgeous and for a moment just a person and not a coldblooded killer.

Kisame props himself up on shaky arms and pushes into him again; Itachi's voice and scent and oh god, so hot, so tight overwhelm his senses, making him dizzy with pure lust and raw passion.

Arching his neck and grasping the bedstead with sweat-slick fingers, Itachi rolls his hips to meet his partner's thrusts. Kisame hooks a slender leg over one arm and slams into the lithe body again, shaking the walls and ramming the bed up against the wall. The pleasure is almost blinding.

Perfect, Kisame thinks.


Hmmm... I have a real thing for bottomingfromthetop!Itachi. He's so tiny and yummy. As usual, I beg you on bended knee *licks you* for comments- they makes me happies! Yay!  :3


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*adoration* I really really like this! :)

*scampers off to your journal in search of more fanfiction-y goodness*

Yay I'm glad you liked it! I hope you enjoy my other fics, though they're all different pairings so I dunno if you find anything you like... I hope you do, though! :D

I do! I absolutely love your sandcest fic, and your ZabuHaku fic. Even the SasuNaru- which is a pairing I tend not to read.


That's great, it makes me so happy when people like the stuff I write! Especially the Sandcest fic as there aren't enough Sandcest fans around so I don't think that particular fic gets much love! XD

There really aren't... Some of the most eccentric pairings tend to not have a lot of followers :(

THIS WAS SO SO SO HOT ♥ /fans self

absolutely beautiful! :)

Yay I love it when people say my writing is hot! Thank you! =D

*PUUUUUUUUR* Love to this <3 More please!

Yay glad you liked and thanks for commenting! I'll try to get writing more soon, but I'm so flipping busy at the moment... hopefully I'll get more posted soon though! XD

Total orgasm right there. More please. Very delicious smut. Not overly erotic and still very sensual.

Sorry if this is out of place, but I noticed that the verb tense in this sentence is off. Itachi's voice and scent and oh god, so hot, so tight overwhelming his senses, making him dizzy with pure lust and raw passion. Okay, so, before Itachi, there should be a semi-colon - ; -, not a comma, and the -overwhelming- should be overwhelm.

Thanks for the porn. Beats the hell out of watching videos online, loll!

Glad you thought it was sensual, I'm never sure if I can translate what I'm seeing in my head into words very well! And thanks for pointing out the grammar mistake, I'm a total grammar nerd and was sure that something sounded a little off there, but I was posting this late last night and my brain wasn't working! I'll fix that right up. =D

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Woo! I have achieved speechlessness! Or, at least, garbled speech... I'm very happy you like it! ^^

Thank you! So happy you enjoyed reading it! :D

That was hot! KisaIta...I think I have added a new OTP to my list! XD EXCELLENT job on this little piece!

So glad you thought it was good! KisaIta is a really awesome pairing to follow, I didn't really think about how awesome they'd be together for aaages until I accidentally stumbled across a fic of them together, but they really are awesome! :D

Yeah, I just recently got back into the Naruto fandom again. KisaIta really is a rare pairing, and I would SO LOVE to see MORE of it! XD

Wow, this was awesome! I totally wuv it!
I really adore Kisaita but there aren't many well-written fics about them. But yours is so good!

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it so much! :D

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