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Naruto Fanfiction- Communication (SasuNaruSasu)
Bill Nails

After a million years disappearance (well, a few months at least), I'm finally back! Nothing special, just a little bit of a drabble that came to me whilst I was working on another fic, but it kept bugging me so I wrote it down and fiddled with it a bit so hopefully it's okay. I used to back away from writing SasuNaruSasu as they are so difficult to keep in character, but hopefully I'll write a bit more of them in the future as I love those boys oh so much!

Title: Communication

Pairings: Sasuke/Naruto/Sasuke

Rating: R (it's a soft R, really- just a little bit of language and brief sexual references)

Summary: Because Sasuke and Naruto show their feelings for one another in a slightly different way to most. Oneshot drabble.

Disclaimer: Sue me not, for I do not own :3




They lie together, pale limbs entwined with tan, breathing heavily in the moments following their climax. Naruto grins and tells Sasuke through tired gasps that he looks pretty with his hair all mussed up like that; Sasuke rolls his eyes, smirking, and tells Naruto to shut the fuck up, idiot, and asks why on earth he has to say such stupid shit all the time anyway. Naruto scowls and gives Sasuke a playful shove, tells him to stop being so mean, bastard. Tightening his grip possessively on Naruto's hip, Sasuke presses his lips to the other's with a tiny smile and Naruto can't help but sigh contentedly into the kiss. 

After all, in Naruto and Sasuke's fucked-up little world, sharp insults and harsh touches mean I love you, never leave me, and nothing says I don't need you, you mean nothing, like a blank gaze (why are you here?) and quiet compliance (I just don't care any more).


Comments plz *fangirl flail*


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Loved this a lot! It's so true to their characters to communicate non-verbally, and this drabble describes it in such a beautiful way! <3 *saving to memories*

Aw, thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It was my first attempt at a drabble so I wasn't sure if it came out sounding right. *grin*

Short and sweet and so in character, I'm putting this in my memories right now. You've get Sasuke and Naruto just the way I imagine they'd be. Because really, if you're in a relationship with someone who called you his best friend right before he tried to kill you there would definitely be a double meaning to everything.

I'm glad you see their relationship the same way as I do, it really is fascinating. I am grateful for your kind words, they made me smile stupidly with joy. XD

That last part is very true. You've captured the silent understanding/silent communication part of their relationship very well.

I'm glad you thought it came out well! :D

I think this very good, for such a short drabble. I can't say more than how IC this is, how well it flowed and that the last line was sheer brilliance (I think you've captured the essence of NaruSasu very well).

First off, thank you for your nice comments. Secondly, I worship you and have most of your fics in my bookmarked pages! I just discovered your LJ a few days ago and read all your fics, but I don't know if I got round to commenting on them, so let me just say how much I am a fan of your work! *worships*

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